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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #15 on: October 31, 2011, 04:06:47 PM »
Chet wouldn't give up his missile build Chevelle.  It's about the only thing he's got going for himself on the track.

Dirt, easy boy.  Emma, er, Precious, er, Kris, is one smart cookie.  She sure does think she know's how to get back at Chet but we'll have to see if she ran all the variables.
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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #16 on: November 19, 2011, 02:50:16 PM »
The Shakedown


I’ve had a lot of cheap cars in my day but never in a million years would I have spent five thousand dollars on a rusty Mustang II.  From the looks of the peeling paint and the rust bubbles along the wheel arches it’s safe to say this car has seen better days.  I hope the 302 under the cheesy hood sticker isn’t half as tired as the body.  It was no surprise that the dome light didn’t come on when I popped the door open but the new chrome shine of a T-handle shifter did catch my eye.  It was probably cheaper, or less embarrassing, than tracking down a factory replacement, either way it was mine now.  I tossed by duffle into the back and slid onto a well worn bucket seat, not worn in a bad way, it was strangely cozy.

I cranked the old pony for twenty or thirty seconds before remembering that not all cars have electronic fuel injection.  After a couple of pumps on the gas pedal I swore I heard the choke set but I leaned my toe into it a little just in case.  The V8 fired to life and revved to three grand before the shock of it settled in and I pulled my foot off of the gas.  A slight vibration rolled along with the revs, this couldn’t be a stock motor, not making this kind of noise and idling this rough.  Not unless the EGR valve was stuck open a tad.  Another quick blip of the throttle and she was purring like a kitten. 

The dash lit up as soon as I pulled the headlight knob and a cluster of gauges pulsated in front of me.  Oil pressure was hovering near 25psi, fuel pressure steady at 15, temp still cold, full tank of gas, ammeter sitting at zero, nothing too out of the ordinary.  A quick tap and the amps slid into the positive and bobbed with the lump of the engine.  There was definitely more to this car than I realized and a slight grin spread across my face as we eased out onto the parkway, sideways.

We cut around the bypass and headed for New Cut Road, the twistiest two miles around.  From stop sign to stop sign in 93 seconds wasn’t a personal best but for a shakedown run it wasn’t too shabby.  I flipped her around to go uphill this time and waited for the rear to settle.  I eased out the clutch, brought the revs up to match, and the Cobra bit into the pavement launching us through first gear.  Over the crest of the first incline I up shifted to second and pushed the hammer down approaching the first left hander.  Not even a squeal as the front end dug in and set us over the apex.  Steady into third around a wide sweeping right hander with just a little under steer that was quickly overcome by lifting the gas slightly.  Hard braking into a 90 degree left, back on the gas and into second gear as the tail slid around a degreasing radius right hander.  Up into third again as the road straightened out, flat through the slight left hand kink almost to the limiter as we break the tree line.  Hard brakes, downshift to second and accelerate out of another 90 degree right uphill to the stop sign.  87 seconds.  No complaints from the car, plenty of grip, what a ride.

We sat for a second and I could start to smell the brakes overheating behind the wheels.  One more test to go.  We drove past the diner on the way to the bypass, the fastest way to the Motorsport Complex.  We hit the exit ramp in the top of second and I rolled into third as we merged onto 95 south and put the pedal to the metal.  70, 80, 90, 100, 105, 110, …115, …….120, ……..125, ……… and lift to make the exit ramp for Montgomery Motorsport Complex.  Not much on top speed but she handles well for a tired old pony.
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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #17 on: December 15, 2011, 03:44:25 PM »
What's the latest, Fit?
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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #18 on: December 15, 2011, 04:05:07 PM »
I was "encouraged" by a publisher to submit a 10,000 word or more story by January 5th.  I've been trying to get 1,000 words a night written, transcribed, and compiled.  That would give me about a week to edit it and rewrite any issues that pop up.  Needless to say Fit, Chet and Kris are in a holding pattern while I work on something that may generate actual dollars.
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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #19 on: December 15, 2011, 05:17:11 PM »
Hey now, that's NEWS.  Can you say anything more about that, cuz that's about the coolest thing I've heard all week!
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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #20 on: December 15, 2011, 09:42:38 PM »
Two weeks ago I entered a writing exercise, like I do all the time.  They tend to be informal, short, and run by authors, editors, or fans of writing.  The topic was quite vague, The Unknown.  Recommended 300 word limit due the same day.  I started to think about it and ended up in la-la land all day with an alternate dystopian society muse banging in my ear.  During lunch I started writing, not eating, and after an hour I was pushing 1,200 words.  I finished up a very rough draft and submitted it.

Here is the review I received - "That was unbelievably freaky and awesome. Kinda scared the crap out of me, but hey, it's kind of the point right? I envy what you did here. Taking current media coverages and turning it into a not-quite-fiction piece, that had me sitting on the edge of my chair, wishing I could read it faster, that's something special. Amazing work Andrew!"

I was floored.  The post had other praise from the other entrants that read it and they were all good.  The next day I had an invite from another author/writer that follows me on Google+ encouraging me to expand on the idea to meet the requirements of a Kindling Press request for submissions on the same topic.  (You think that original author prompted that topic for a reason?  Yup, they were looking for more entrants to fill an Anthology book about uprisings.

Needless to say I've expanded the original 1,200 words to nearly 3,000 in 4 days even though I took last night off to race and I have over 10 hand written pages to transcribe tonight.  I hope to get close to the 10,000 word recommendation before Christmas so I can send it out to a team of elves to proofread and send back in time to edit before submitting it on January 5th.

It's going to be close.  Unfortunately that means Chet and the gang are on the back burner until after the new year then I hold my breath to see if I am selected to go to print/download.  (fingers crossed)  That's about it so far. 
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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #21 on: December 15, 2011, 09:48:12 PM »
Congrats, and good luck to you, Fit!

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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #22 on: December 16, 2011, 08:24:22 AM »
Well that's spectacular. What little writing clinics do you follow? I'd like to get better. Sounds like the way to do it.

And anyway, I'm proud for you, man, honestly.

Hoisting my coffee mug to you.  :D
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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #23 on: December 16, 2011, 10:16:37 AM »
I don't follow any clinics, just authors, publishers, and other writers.  Mostly on Google + but also on Twitter and private blogs.  I've done plenty of Fan Fiction as practice because you don't have to create the world or the characters you just get to put your spin on a theme.  Good practice, not a way to make money or "go pro" unless you write a spin-off series like the Halo books, Star Wars novels etc.

I make sure to follow authors that I like to read as well as those that are very active and provide feedback.  I don't care if you submit 100,000 words to your favorite author in the world, if they don't get back to you with comments it doesn't help. 

Here's a short list of places I have submitted works to.
Merry Sisters of Fate
http://merryfates.com/

Thea Atkinshon (WriterWednesday Exercise)
http://theaatkinson.wordpress.com/

Nina Pelletier (Daily Prompt and Share Exercises)
http://www.shewrites.com/profile/NinaPelletier

Nothings guaranteed but the more writers I follow the better I feel about what I put on paper.  YMMV.
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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #24 on: December 16, 2011, 10:33:08 AM »
My thanks, Fit. I value your opinion.
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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #25 on: December 19, 2011, 08:10:35 PM »
Fit, that sounds really cool.  Hopefully you can get paid for your work.  Now if you get published, I just might trade you some in-game cars that you don't have for a copy of your work ;)

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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #26 on: December 19, 2011, 09:22:01 PM »
Would you ever be up for proofreading/opining some writings when you get settled?
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Re: Montgomery Motorsport Complex
« Reply #27 on: December 19, 2011, 10:05:06 PM »
Charger - If I get published I'll be happy enough to get it out for free to some people, including friends on this board.

Top - Once I'm over this hurdle I'd be happy to proofread/edit your writing.  Just shoot me a PM sometime and we can exchange email addresses.
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